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Monday, 20 August 2018

''Please, help me... help me, please.'' That line is repeated inside my mind over and over but I can not say it out loud. What coming out of my mouth is ''woof-woof.'' I have never felt more despondent.
Max is what I am called. Emily is my best friend. We have a lot of fun together. She treats me with kindness and She goes to work everyday and come back home at midnight. She is the only best friend I've ever had but I am not sure I am her only. Emily is getting busier and busier, loneliness always surround me. Even though I am depressed, I know I have to be understanding that's what a friend should do. But I can't stop being piss off at her. I and Emily would have been like that forever until an unexpected occurrence happen to me.
A mysterious group of people are putting me in the car. As the car drive further and further, my sight gets more blurry and my eyes are filled with tear. ''What is she doing now?'' and " Is she thinking about me and wonder w  here I am?''. That was all I remember before I wake up in a cage. I realised I am not home. I have been kidnapped. I looked around and there were many cages in the room. I had not ever seen such many different kind of dogs in my life. They all seemed pitifully sad.
   'Hey, welcome. I'm Jack.' said a Pit Pull. He looked old, weak and kind.
    'Not so pleased to see you here, I'm Charlie.' said another dog. Difference from Jack, he has a hoarse bass strong voice like an echo in an empty room. His intelligence and courage was showed in his eyes.
    'Hi, I'm Max. Where are we?' He asked as he looked around the room to find those mysterious people. 
    'I've been here over a year but still don't know where we are. And stop looking for them. It's such a relief for us that they're not here. Also don't make so much noise if they're around otherwise you would cause hurt for yourself.'
Then suddenly, a loud slam was echoing in the empty room. Everyone was turning pale as those mysterious people walked in.
'Go and check if anyone is missing.' yelled a big guy who had a voice like foghorn. He was a leader of that group because everyone seemed very obedient to him. Quickly, a skinny guy grabbed an enormous silver stick, he went around the room as he rubbed the silver stick to each cage. The silence room made the sound even louder and louder. When he stopped, the room became quiet again but the sound was still echoing inside my head. Max had never even imagined such a strange and dangerous place. 'One dog is missing, sir.' said the skinny guy. Everyone got even paler than before. The big guy yelled: 'Find it, now!' I was confusing, have no clue what was going on.
'There is another silly guy. He shouldn't have done that especially after seeing what happened to Bob.' sighed Jack.
'You will know soon what trouble you've gotten in' interrupted Charlie.
He kept silence because so much thing were going on my mind, he was wondering if I could see Emily again. He was imagining the first time Emily brought me to her house, when I laid on her lap to sleep and how happy he was when she came back home from work,... He had never been more frightened and lonely, never, not even when Emily did not spend time with him. He was immersed in thought until the those people came back with a huge sackcloth bag. When the bag opened, it made Max terribly terrifying. That was a dog who had been escaped, many knife wounds were appearing on his body. He was laying down there, looked exhausted and despondent. Looking at him, Max had decided that he could not stay here, he had to come back and see Emily.
The next morning, he told them about his plan to escape. But it wasn't like he had expected.
'Are you out of your mind? Could you see what happened to Bob yesterday? Don't try to put us in danger.' said angrily Charlie
'Rubbish! There is no doubt that your plan is not gonna be successful. Have you ever imagined what would happen to us after that?'
'You just came here yesterday so you don't have any idea how cruel those people are. So please don't mention your plan again with us.' Jack anxiously whispered.
Even though he knew it was such a deadly plan but Emily was worth it, He wanted to see Emily more than anything. Then he left at midnight. Not so long after, he could hear people yelling from distance. He keeps running, those people keep chasing. He is not sure what is going to happen to his faith but it is not as important as seeing Emily again.
                                                                                                                                                                     

Friday, 10 August 2018


Last weak, we learnt about sentence which is one of the basic thing to build a block of writing. We use sentences to express ideas and opinions. The sentence needs to be a complete idea, and it has to make sense. A sentence normally follows two basic rules: A verb and A complete thought. To me, by learning this, it makes me a lots easier when comes to write a text or a paragraph, having good sentences affect a lots to the essay. People would understand more clearly of my thoughts and what I want to spread out from my essay. 

Colour: Blue
Animal: Dog
Flowers: Hydrangea
Water
Season: Winter
Time of day: Midnight